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考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改,新东方在线考研频道编辑整理,总有一篇适用你。
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Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this letter to you to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the position of accountant you recently advertised in www.51job.com.. Enclosed with the letter is my resume which further details my qualifications.I have faith in being a competent accountant. To begin with, I am specialized in Auditting and I have already passed the exam for CPA. Thus, I believe my majoy and my skills qualify me for the job. Besides,my personality makes me a perfect applicant for this vacancysince I possess qualifications like prudence,efficience and responsibility which are indispensable to be a accountant.Thank you for taking time out of your busy scheduleto read my letter . I do hope you would grant me an interview. Yours sincerely,Li Ming
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Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this letter to you to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the position of accountant you recently advertised in www.51job.com.. Enclosed with the letter is my resume which further details my qualifications.I have faith in being a competent accountant. To begin with, I am specialized in Auditting(拼写错误) and I have already passed the exam for CPA. Thus, I believe my majoy(拼写错误) and my skills qualify me for the job. Besides, my personality makes me a perfect applicant for this vacancysince I possess qualifications like prudence, efficience(拼写错误) and responsibility which are indispensable to be a(应该用an)accountant.Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to read my letter. I do hope you would grant me an interview. Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评:8分拼写错误稍多,注意控制字数,写的很不错。
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