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Dear Bob
     I am writing to made an apology to you for I lost the book which I borrowed for you last week.Yesterday,when I have came back from school and I didn't find it everywhere. I am so sorry you cannot read it at present.
     The book which I borrowed for you is so renowned that I believe I can find another one ,and I will buy it and return to you. If I cannot find the similiar one, how about you buying another book by yourself and I will pay for it. And if there are any other solutions you like ,please let me know.
     I am sorry again for my carelessness.Looking forward to your reply.
     Lingming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob（加逗号） I am writing to made（不定式to后用动词原形） an apology to you for I lost the book which I borrowed for（用介词from，borrow from） you last week. Yesterday, when I have came back from school and I didn't find it everywhere. I am so sorry you cannot read it at present. The book which I borrowed for（用介词from，borrow from） you is so renowned that I believe I can find another one , and I will buy it and return to you. If I cannot find the similar（拼写错误） one, how about you buying another book by yourself and I will pay for it. And if there are any other solutions（应该用单数，前面的any是任一） you like , please let me know. I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply. Lingming（落款不对）点评：6分与模板内容雷同。注意格式，落款分两行位于右下角，可以看一下其他同学的落款。