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Dear Prof. Bob,I am a senior in the Politics and Law Department and I am in Class 2. I would like to give you my sincere apologies for I didn’t hand in my paper last week.I have prepared the postgraduate interview until yesterday. Last week, I was so busy that I had no time to write my paper. But now, the interview is over. Could you kindly extend the deadline for my paper to next week? I promise the paper will be in your mailbox by next week.Please accept my apologies for any inconvenience it may cause. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.  Sincerely yours,
    LiMing
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Prof. Bob,I am a senior in the Politics and Law Department and I am in Class 2. I would like to give you my sincere apologies for I didn’t hand in my paper last week. I have prepared the postgraduate interview until yesterday. Last week, I was so busy that I had no time to write my paper. But now, the interview is over. Could you kindly extend the deadline for my paper to next week? I promise the paper will be in your mailbox by next week（避免累述，改成then）.Please accept my apologies for any inconvenience it may cause. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.  Sincerely yours,LiMing点评：9分写的很好。争取满分！