考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(333)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Bob,
    I am your classmate who is learning in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature.I would like to give you my apology for my oversight about your book.
    Firstly,it is sure to replace your book on last week,but untill now I can not take it to you,because it is lost by my brother.Secondly,I want to buy a new one as same as it,but in many bookstores it is sold out.So I have to wait for it next week.
    I feel very apology for my stupid,and if you could forgive me after return your book,I am very glad and thank you.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob,
    I am your classmate who is learning in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature（既然是同学，你们应该就是互相人是的，这些内容就不用交代了）. I would like to give you my apology for my oversight about your book.
    Firstly, it is sure to replace your book on last week, but untill（拼写错误） now I can not take it to you, because it is lost by my brother. Secondly, I want to buy a new one as same as it, but in many bookstores it is sold out. So I have to wait for it next week.
    I feel very apology（这是个名词，这里要用形容词） for my stupid, and if you could forgive me after return（介词后用动名词）your book, I am very glad and thank you.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    点评：6分
    错误有点多，同时建议看一下模板，优化一下自己的结构。