考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(342)

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考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Sir or Madam:
    I am a junior of Jilin University who are preparing for the NETEM next year .I am wonder whether it is convenient for you to tell me something about a book named  which used for reviewing.
    That book is published by Northeast Forest University publishing house .And it has about 300 pages. I would need to know your terms payment. I also want to enquire how items will be shipped which it can be delivered.
    Thank you for you kindness, and your attention to this will be highly appreciated.
    Your ,sincerely
    Li ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam:（英语中用逗号） I am a junior of Jilin University who are preparing for the NETEM next year .I am wonder（用I’m wondering或者是I wonder）whether it is convenient for you to tell me something about a book named （英语中不用书名号，首字母要大写）which used for reviewing. That book is published by Northeast Forest University publishing house（首字母大写） .And it has about 300 pages. I would need to know your terms payment. I also want to enquire how items will be shipped which it can be delivered. Thank you for you（应该用所有格your）kindness, and your attention to this will be highly appreciated.  Your ,（逗号放到sincerely后）sincerely Li ming（Ming）点评：6分错误比较多，不要在格式上丢分。