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考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Bob,
    I'm writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the > to you when I left Japan.I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully.Had I paid more attention then,I wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake.
    Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the book enormously.I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price.If you do not maid, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Janpan.
    Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience.I really hope you will accept my sincere apology
    Faithfully yours,
    Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob,
    I'm writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the >（注意英语中没有书名号） to you when I left Japan. I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake.
    Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the book enormously. I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price. If you do not maid（mind？）, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Janpan（拼写错误）.
    Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology
    Faithfully yours,
    Li Ming
    点评：6分
    道歉信，重点应该是道歉。建议第一段简要说明这是一封道歉信，然后第二段进行道歉，并附上一两条解决方案。