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考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Bob,
    I am the boss of the bookstore in which you place an order of some English books last week.It is very sad for me to tell you that those books can't be delivered to your home on time due to the bad weather.
    Firstly,I would like to apologize for the unconvenience we have caused and hope that it would have no bad effect on your study.Secondly,I promise to cope with this problem as soon as possible and ensure you can get your books at the end of this week,however,if you feel that it is unconvenient for you , you may cancel your order so that you can choose other suitable bookstores.Thirdly,thank you for your confidence in our shop and express my sincere apologizy to you again.
    I look forward to your understand and hearing from you soon.     Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob,
    I am the boss of the bookstore in which you place an order of some English books last week. It is very sad for me to tell you that those books can't be delivered to your home on time due to the bad weather.
    Firstly, I would like to apologize for the unconvenience（拼写错误） we have caused and hope that it would have no bad effect on your study. Secondly, I promise to cope with this problem as soon as possible and ensure you can get your books at the end of this week, however, if you feel that it is unconvenient（拼写错误） for you , you may cancel your order so that you can choose other suitable bookstores. Thirdly, thank you for your confidence in our shop and express my sincere apologizy（拼写错误，这里应该用一个名词） to you again.
    I look forward to your understand and hearing from you soon.
　    　Yours sincerely,
      Li Ming
    点评：6分
    字数超出的太多。