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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Mr. Bob,
     I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to read the books on shelves. I bought the book Criminal Law from the library last week. But I am so sorry that I broken the book yesterday. I must express my sincere apologizes for any inconvenience my mistake may occur.
     I think there are two ways to solve this problem. Firstly, I will
    Return the broken book to you and accept any punishment such as paying for the book. Secondly, I will buy a same book and deliver it to your office by next week.
     Please tell me your decision. I really hope you can accept my apologizes and look forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yours truly,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Mr. Bob,
I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to read the books on shelves. I bought（应该用borrow的过去式borrowed）the book Criminal Law from the library last week. But I am so sorry that I broken the book yesterday. I must express my sincere apologizes（用名词apology）for any inconvenience my mistake may occur.
I think there are two ways to solve this problem. Firstly, I will Return the broken book to you and accept any punishment such as paying for the book. Secondly, I will buy a same book and deliver it to your office by next week. Please tell me your decision. I really hope you can accept my apologizes（用名词apology） and look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours truly,Li Ming点评：8分写的挺不错的，要注意apology是名词，apologize是动词。