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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
    I would like to express my deepest apology for I left without saying good-bye two days ago. And I am writing the letter to you because of sincere friendship between us. I am sorry to cause you sorrowful.
     I wish to explain the reason why I have todo so.On the one hand,I am verygratefulto you and your family for the hospitalitywhen I study in your local school.On the other hand, I believe our real friendship is one of the most precious emotions in my life, and a little worriment is in my heart once I have to say goodbye.
     Please allow me to say sorry again. And wewill always be friends.
     Yours sincerely
     Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob,I would like to express my deepest apology for I left without saying good-bye two days ago. And I am writing the letter to you because of（加定冠词the）sincere friendship between us. I am sorry to cause you（加to be） sorrowful. I wish to explain the reason why I have todo so.（看完这句话会以为你第二段将要解释为什么没有说再见就走了）On the one hand, I am verygratefulto you and your family for the hospitalitywhen I study in your local school. On the other hand, I believe our real friendship is one of the most precious emotions in my life, and a little worriment is in my heart once I have to say goodbye. Please allow me to say sorry again. And wewill always be friends. Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：5分字数有点超，第二段写的不好。你需要进行解释。看一下范文。