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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return buy the Enghlish book which you should from you last week.
The Enghlish book which the important for you ,I believe you can buy the similar another one in your local store.How about your buying
another one for yourself and I will pay for it? Perhaps I may to give you a Enghlish book from the book store. But believe I had no intention
to the book forgot the home for us.
I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return buy（这里不能同时使用两个动词）the Enghlish（拼写错误） book which you should（这里缺少一个实义动词） from you last week.
The Enghlish（拼写错误） book which the（改成is，否则从句中没有谓语动词） important for you , I believe you can buy the similar another one in your local store. How about your（做buying的主语，改成you）buying another one for yourself and I will pay for it? Perhaps I may to（去掉，情态动词后直接跟动词原形） give you a（an） Enghlish（拼写错误） book from the book store. But believe I had no intention to the book forgot the home for us（改成forget the book at home）.
I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming点评：几乎是模板上的内容，另外错误太多。