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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
    I am writing to make an apology to you for I can'taccept your invitation to go to the park tomorrow.Because my boss suddenly calls me to take part in a very important meeting which to be held in another city.
    Accordingly,I am so sorry that you cannot paly with me in time.But it is necessary for us to makea newarrangement.How about the day after tomorrow and I would come back soon?Ifthereare anyother plansyou like,please let meknow.
    I really wish to go to the park together with you.Please accept my sincereapologies and looking forward to your reply.
    Yourssincerely,
LiMing
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writing to make an apology to you for I can'taccept your invitation to go to the park tomorrow. Because my boss suddenly calls me to take part in a very important meeting which to（改成will） be held in another city.Accordingly, I am so sorry that you cannot paly（拼写错误，play） with me in time. But it is necessary for us to makea newarrangement. How about the day after tomorrow and I would come back soon? Ifthereare anyother plansyou like, please let meknow.I really wish to go to the park together with you. Please accept my sincereapologies and looking forward to your reply.Yourssincerely,LiMing（落款位于右下方）点评：7-8分写的不错。稍微超出了几个词，另外注意细节。