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考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Bob,
    I am writing this letter to apologize for the accident which I unconsciously caused yesterday.
    It was a coincidence we met each other on the way to school. I did not realize that you were hurry to laboratory.I thought you were preparing for the lecture which is due on this Friday as I was. Therefore I spent much more time than expected on communication with you about it.I have not intention to make you late for the experiment.Hope it would not be an obstacle for your teacher to evaluate your terminal score.
    I faithfully hope you can accept my apology.
    Your sincerely
    LiMing
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize for the accident which I unconsciously caused yesterday. It was a coincidence we met each other on the way to school. I did not realize that you were hurry to laboratory. I thought you were preparing for the lecture which is due on this Friday as I was.Therefore I spent much more time than expected on communication（这里应该用动名词communicating） with you about it. I have not（应该用no） intention to make you late for the experiment. Hope it would not be an obstacle for your teacher to evaluate your terminal score.Ifaithfully hope you can accept my apology.  Your sincerely（加逗号） LiMing点评：8分写的很不错，完全领会了道歉信的主旨。注意一下细节。