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Dear Bob,
    I’m writing this letter to say sorry to you.I ‘m so regret that I forgot to return your music CD to you when I have came back from Canada.
     I hope that you can forgive my unattention.If you need it in a short time,Ican return it to you by express.And if you don’t,I can give back it to you personally when I go to the Canada in May.Which would you like?
     I’m looking forward for your reply early.And please accept my sincere apology again.Best wishes!
    Yours
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I’m writing this letter to say sorry to you. I ‘m so regret that I forgot to return your music CD to you when I have came back from Canada. I hope that you can forgive my unattention（拼写错误）. If you need it in a short time, I can return it to you by express. And if you don’t, I can give back it（改成it back） to you personally when I go to the Canada in May. Which would you like? I’m looking forward for your reply early. And please accept my sincere apology again. Best wishes!Yours（加一个表示态度诚恳的副词，然后加一个句号） Li Ming点评：感觉是仿写的模板内容，这个话题已经被太多人写了，建议自己再想一个话题。