考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(344)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Bob
    I am wirting this letter to express my sincere apologize for canceling our appointment last Saturday.
    My roommate was badly ill on Friday evening. I took her to the hospital and had to look after her and take her back again for the injection the next day. That is the reason why I could not make it.
    I feel so sorry about that. Hope you understand my situation. Shall we fix another time this week? Could you please check your schedule and let me know?
    Best wishes,
    Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob（加逗号）
    I am wirting（拼写错误） this letter to express my sincere apologize（这里应该用名词） for canceling our appointment last Saturday.
    My roommate was badly ill on Friday evening. I took her to the hospital and had to look after her and take her back again for the injection the next day. That is the reason why I could not make it.
    I feel so sorry about that. Hope you understand my situation. Shall we fix another time this week? Could you please check your schedule and let me know?
    Best wishes,
    Li Ming
    点评：6分
    字数不够。另外看一下范文，分析一下你结构上可以优化的地方。