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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob, I am writing to apologize for having foggotton to return to you the book which I borrowed from you last week.I back to school yesterday,I find this book in my luggage.Had I paid more attention then,I wouldn’t made such a stupid mistake. Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the book enormously.If you in need of this book ,I can either deliver it to you by EMS,or buy another one by yourself and I will pay for it.If you don’t mind,I will bring it back next time when I go home.  Please let me know which solution you perfer at your earliest convenience.I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.
Yourssincerely, Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing to apologize for having foggotton（拼写错误） to return to you the book（return the book to you） which I borrowed from you last week. I（这里应该加一个动词） back to school yesterday,（加连词） I find（应该用过去时） this book in my luggage. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn’t made such a stupid mistake. Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the book enormously. If you in need of this book ,I can either deliver it to you by EMS, or buy another one by yourself and I will pay for it. If you don’t mind, I will bring it back next time when I go home.  Please let me know which solution you perfer（拼写错误） at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：模板内容太多了啊。写不出自己的动词也要写，这样使用模板的内容如果老师不给你分或是随便给你两三分你也没话可说的。模板的参考价值更多的应该是结构，而不是内容。