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考研英语待批改作文：

    Dear Bob,
    I have just arrived at home, safely and sound.I'm sorry to tell you that I had brought the CD which I borrowed from you last week.I hope you can accept my sincere apology for my carelessness.
    Since the CD is made in America,so I believe that you can buy a new one in your local supermarket. I will pay for all the expense.However,if you prefer the one I brought back.I could mail it to you via the EMS,which will not take too much time.If you have any other solutions,please let me know.
    Please allow me to say sorry again.I'm looking forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob,
    I have just arrived at home, safely and sound（这个词做副词时是“酣睡、睡得沉”的意思，用在这里想要表达什么意思）.I'm sorry to tell you that I had brought the CD which I borrowed from you last week.I hope you can accept my sincere apology for my carelessness.
    Since the CD is made in America,so I believe that you can buy a new one in your local supermarket. I will pay for all the expense.However,if you prefer the one I brought back.I could mail it to you via the EMS,which will not take too much time.If you have any other solutions,please let me know.
    Please allow me to say sorry again.I'm looking forward to your reply.
   
Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming（落款位于右下角）
    点评：6分
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