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Dear Bob:
     Please accept my sincere apologise that I have forgot your musicCD at my luggage ,I feel so guilty I can't give back it to you rigtht now.
     I would send it by post for you if you would used it urgently,and you would had it in two weeks.I remember that you told me you want to visit China next month.I would give it back to you at that time as well.meanwhile,I would like to be your guider in China!
     once again,I am so sorry for any inconvenience coused about you.
    sincerely
     Li Ming
     
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob:（英语中用逗号） Please accept my sincere apologise（这里应该用名词） that I have forgot your music CD at my luggage ,I feel so guilty I can't give back it to you rigtht（拼写错误） now. I would send it by post for you if you would used it urgently, and you would had it in two weeks. I remember that you told me you want to visit China next month. I would give it back to you at that time as well. meanwhile, I would like to be your guider（直接用guid就可以） in China!  once again, I am so sorry for any inconvenience coused about you（caused by me）.（加Yours）sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：5-6分模板内容用的有点多，另外错误比较多，要注意。