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    Dear m :
    I am very sorry for I have forgot to return your book which I borrowed from you on monday week.when I put up with my shelf ,I fonund the book on my shelf. I cannot renturn it you right now because I have to go to my grandparents, home with my parents,so you cannot read it at these weekend.
    The book that I borrow from you is very new, I think you can find another one one the bookstore. If you are hurry to read it you can buy a new one and I will pay for it. If there is any other means which you like ,please let me know.or I have give the book back to you next monday .
    I am so sorry again for may bad memory.please accept my sincere apologise.
    yours
    LiMing
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear m（题目中是Bob）:（英语中用逗号）I am verysorryfor I have forgot to return your book which I borrowed from you on monday（周几的首字母要大写）week（去掉）. when（w大写） I put up with my shelf ,I fonund（拼写错误） the book on my shelf. I cannot renturn（拼写错误）it you right now becauseI have to go to my grandparents,（’） home with my parents, so you cannotread it atthese（应该是this）weekend. The book that I borrow from you is very new,I think you can find another one one（改成介词in） the bookstore. If you are hurry to read it you can buy a new one and I will pay for it. If there is any other means which you like ,please let me know. or I have give the book back to you next monday（周几的首字母要大写） . I am so sorry again for may（my） bad memory. please accept my sincere apologise（这里应该用名词apology）. yours（改成Yours sincerely，）LiMing点评：5分字数超了，另外错误比较多。另外建议同学尽量避免使用这个话题，写这个话题的人太多了。