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Dear Bob,
     I am writing this letter to apologize for mading your walkman can't work. You are so kind to borrow it to me for prepare the English test. But at last moment, I broke it. Had I paid more attention, I wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake.
     As we all known, it's your favorite that is your birthday present from your farther. So please allow me to do somthing for it and to say sorry again. Enclose with this letter is a new walkman that is the same model and color with previous one. And I hope you will like it.
     Ireally hope you will accept my sincere apology and the new walkman. If you don't accept them, I will fell more awfully sorry.
    Your Sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize for mading（拼写错误） your walkman can't work（这里需要用名词性结构）. You are so kind to borrow it to me for prepare（介词后用动名词）the English test. But at last moment, I broke it. Had I paid more attention, I wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake. As we all known, it's your favorite that is your birthday present from your farther. So please allow me to do something（拼写错误） for it and to say sorry again. Enclose with this letter is a new walkman that is the same model and color with（加定冠词the）previous one. And I hope you will like it. Ireally hope you will accept my sincere apology and the new walkman. If you don't accept them, I will fell more awfully sorry. Your（Yours） Sincerely, Li Ming点评：6-7分错误有点多，要注意细节。