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Dear Sophia,I am very sorry to inform you that I got the album which you borrowed me last week missed.Yesterday when I come back from the library,I left it there carelessly.Noticing the thing suddenly,I rushed to the library and found it missing.Regretfully,the administrator awared nothing like it while consulted.To make up my fault,I will buy the same album and mail it to you as soon as possible,attaching another album of mine which you like as a token of my appology.Please allow me to say sorry again.Best Regards,Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sophia（题目中给的是Bob）,I am very sorry to inform you that I got the album which you borrowed me last week missed. Yesterday when I come back from the library, I left it there carelessly. Noticing the thing suddenly, I rushed to the library and found it missing. Regretfully, the administrator awared（拼写错误） nothing like it while consulted.To make up my fault, I will buy the same album and mail it to you as soon as possible, attaching another album of mine which you like as a token of my appology（拼写错误）.Please allow me to say sorry again.Best Regards,Li Ming点评：8-9分写的很不错，内容也很充实，字数刚刚好。考试的时候一定要注意审题，一般题目中会给出是写给谁的信。