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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
     I am grateful to be employed by you beforea fewmonths ago,working with you and other colleagues in your computer company. It isthe most one of wonderful memories in my life. But I find, in recently, the job is not fit for me, and I have decided to quit this job. I would like togive you my apology for resigning the work.
    There are some main reasons accounting for this as follows. For one thing, the level ofmy health isdeclined by the job's pressure. I would like to travel by myself in order to relax mental and physical.In addition, my previous majorcan notmatch forthefeatures of the work. For another, I believeI am notinterested in computer sciencebyworkingmonths.
     Please accept my sincere apologyforany inconvenience my leaving caused.Ilook forward to hearing from you.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am grateful to be employed by you beforea fewmonths ago,working with you and other colleagues in your computer company. It isthe most one of（one of the most） wonderful memories in my life. But I find, in recently, the job is not fit for me, and I have decided to quit this job. I would like togive you my apology for resigning the work.There are some main reasons accounting for this as follows. For one thing, the level ofmy health isdeclined by the job's pressure. I would like to travel by myself in order to relax mental and physical.In addition, my previous majorcan notmatch forthefeatures of the work. For another, I believeI am notinterested in computer sciencebyworkingmonths. Please accept my sincere apologyforany inconvenience my leaving caused.Ilook forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 点评：不太像道歉信，比较像辞职信。字数超出太多了。模板和句型可以在论坛搜一下。