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考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Bob,
    I am writing to make a apology for missing the appiontment with you at the Yangzi Coffee House on Sunday 8p.m.. I was called to work from lunch time to midnight by my boss that day suddenly. Unfortunately,my mobile was out of charge so I couldn’t inform you in time. Please accept my sincere apology.
    To express my apology I intend to invite you to dinner in my house tonight.Besides,I will give you a surprise and hope you enjoy it.I am sure things like this will not happen again.Please turst me.If you have any suggestion to alleviate your disappointment to me,please email me and I will do what I can do with my heart.
    Please allow me to say sorry again for that.I will appreciate it if you come for dinner. Thank you for your time.
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Bob,
    I am writing to make a apology for missing the appiontment（拼写错误） with you at the Yangzi Coffee House on Sunday 8p.m.. I was called to work from lunch time to midnight by my boss that day suddenly. Unfortunately, my mobile was out of charge so I couldn’t inform you in time. Please accept my sincere apology.
    To express my apology I intend to invite you to dinner in my house tonight. Besides, I will give you a surprise and hope you enjoy it. I am sure things like this will not happen again. Please turst（拼写错误） me. If you have any suggestion to alleviate your disappointment to me, please email me and I will do what I can do with my heart.
    Please allow me to say sorry again for that. I will appreciate it if you come for dinner. Thank you for your time.
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Ming
    点评：6-7分
    写的还可以，字数超出的比较多。