考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(365)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
    Dear Sir or Madam,
    I would like to express my deepest apology for that day I have no time to pick you up.Because, there is something wrong with my documents.
    I already to go downstares to drive the car to airport at that time I receive the manager's order.so I must to go back company to mend the wrong documents, I am very sorry that I can not to pick you up in time.At weekend ,I can be your tourist to take you to travle around .
    Please allow me to say sorry again for that.I hope you can forgive me.I will waiting you reply.
    Hannah
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam（题目中给的是Bob）, I would like to express my deepest apology for that day I have no time to pick you up. Because, there is something wrong with my documents. I already to go downstares（拼写错误） to drive the car to airport （加but）at that timeI receive the manager's order. so（So） I must to（去掉）go back（加介词to） company tomend the wrong documents,I am very sorry that I can not to pick you up in time. At weekend , I can be your tourist to take you to travle（拼写错误） around.Please allow me to say sorry again for that. I hope you canforgive me. I will waiting（will后用动词原形）（加介词for） you reply. Hannah（落款错误）点评：6分注意格式，题目中已经给出要求以LiMing的身份给Bob写一封道歉信。