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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am wirting the letter to apologize for our music CD what I forgot to return to you, Bob. I am the person who ever rent to your apartment. In Canada, I have borrowed a music CD from you, yet I forgot to return to you. I found it in my luggage after coming back in China. That is why I have the intention to tell you at once.
Please accept my aplogies for my oversight. There are some solution as your reference. A piece of advice, I would like to send it to you by EMS Express and will pay the expense. The another advice is that I will buy the CD from you and transfer the money to your bank account through my electronic-bank if you accept is more convience for us. Indeed, the music CD is my faverite which have been issued in Canada only.
Once again, I am so sorry for any inconvenience you have suffered. Finally, I am looking forword to your reply soon.
Best Regards,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam（题目中给的是Bob）,
I am wirting（拼写错误） the letter to apologize for our music CD what I forgot to return to you, Bob. I am the person who ever rent to your apartment. In Canada, I have borrowed a music CD from you, yet I forgot to return to you. I found it in my luggage after coming back in China. That is why I have the intention to tell you at once.
Please accept my aplogies（拼写错误） for my oversight. There are some solution（用复数，前面用的是some）as your reference. A piece of advice, I would like to send it to you by EMS Express and will pay the expense. The another advice is that I will buy the CD from you and transfer the money to your bank account through my electronic-bank if you accept is more convience（拼写错误） for us. Indeed, the music CD is my faverite（拼写错误） which have been issued in Canada only.
Once again, I am so sorry for any inconvenience you have suffered. Finally, I am looking forword（拼写错误） to your reply soon.
Best Regards,
LiMing（落款位于右下角）
点评：感觉是由把模板的内容复数了一遍，一定要有你自己的内容。超出字数太多 |
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发表于 2017-8-6 14:08:55