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Dear Bob,
    I have arrived in Jilin yesterday. Thank you for your warmhearted assistance so far in Canada. I have a wonderful journey with your company.
     However, please accept my devout apologies for my oversight about that your favorite music CD was found in my baggage which you have lent me. So, I would like to send this CD to you as quickly as possible by Express Mail Service.
    I am sorry for any inconvenience that may have caused you again. I sincerely hope you have a chance to come to Jilin. I am really waiting for our next meeting. Best wishes for you.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I have arrived in Jilin yesterday. Thank you for your warmhearted assistance so far in Canada. I have a wonderful journey with your company. However, please accept my devout apologies for my oversight about that your favorite music CD was found in my baggage which you have lent me. So, I would like to send this CD to you as quickly as possible by Express Mail Service. I am sorry for any inconvenience that may have caused you again. I sincerely hope you have a chance to come to Jilin. I am really waiting for our next meeting. Best wishes for you.  Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：模板内容用太多了，考试的时候这样会吃亏的。