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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I’m Li Ming. I heard you come back to Canada yesterday. But I found your CD in my luggage.I am writing to say sorry for I forgot to return to you.
I know the CD is significant for you. While don’t worry, I would send it to you as soon as possible. Can you tell me the detail of your address and the number of the door?  I am indeed very sorry for what I did, but believe I had no intention to forget it. I look forward to your replay.  Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob, I’m Li Ming. I heard you come back to Canada yesterday. But I found your CD in my luggage. I am writing to say sorry for I forgot to return （加代词it）to you. I know the CD is significant for you. While don’t worry, I would send it to you as soon as possible. Can you tell me the detail of your address and the number of the door?  I am indeed very sorry for what I did, but believe I had no intention to forget it. I look forward to your replay.  Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：建议道歉的部分写到第二段，这个话题已经被太多的人写，所以最好还是写别的话题。