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DearBob,Ihavejustarrivedathome,safelyandsound.I'msorrytotellyouthatIhadbroughttheCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.Ihopeyoucanacceptmysincereapologyformycarelessness.SincetheCDismadeinAmerica,soIbelievethatyoucanbuyanewoneinyourlocalsupermarket.Iwillpayforalltheexpense.However,ifyouprefertheoneIbroughtback.IcouldmailittoyouviatheEMS,whichwillnottaketoomuchtime.Ifyouhaveanyothersolutions,pleaseletmeknow.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
DearBob,Ihavejustarrivedathome,safelyandsound（这个词做副词时是“酣睡、睡得沉”的意思，用在这里想要表达什么意思）.I'msorrytotellyouthatIhadbroughttheCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.Ihopeyoucanacceptmysincereapologyformycarelessness.SincetheCDismadeinAmerica,soIbelievethatyoucanbuyanewoneinyourlocalsupermarket.Iwillpayforalltheexpense.However,ifyouprefertheoneIbroughtback.IcouldmailittoyouviatheEMS,whichwillnottaketoomuchtime.Ifyouhaveanyothersolutions,pleaseletmeknow.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiMing（落款位于右下角）点评：6分尽量避免使用模板中的话题。