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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am interested in the MBA curriculum. Based on the strength of your university,I am writing to enquire some relative messages about the enrolling qualifications of your university.
     Please provide me the following informations.First,how long of work experience will it require? I am having worked four years after I left my college.Second,whether it is a scholarship for us? On account of my little pay ,I hope to save my cost.Finally,whether it offers reference books?If not,I will buy them on the internet.
     I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Thank you.
      yourssincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am interested in the MBA curriculum. Based on the strength of your university, I am writing to enquire some relative messages about the enrolling qualifications of your university. Please provide me the following informations information是个不可数名词）. First, how long of work experience will it require? I am having worked four years after I left my college. Second, whether it（用there） is a scholarship for us?（注意你前面用的是陈述语气） On account of my little pay（用salary比较好） , I hope to save my cost. Finally, whether it offers reference books? If not, I will buy them on the internet（Internet）. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Thank you.  yours（Yours）sincerely, Li（没有空格）Ming点评：6-7分要注意细节和你的表达，不要在格式上丢分。