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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
I am writing to aplogise for borrowing your English Test Book without your permision last week.I did not realise it until I cleaned my house and found the book yesterday.I had planned to tell you about it,but I was mixed up by unexpected things.
As recently all of us are busy preparing the Postgraduate Entrance Examnation,I believe that the book I borrowed from you is crucial to you.Accordingly,I wonder if it is convenient for you this week and I will return the book.
Please accept my aplogise and forgive me.I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob,
I am writing to aplogise for borrowing your English Test Book without your permision（拼写错误）last week. I did not realise it until I cleaned my house and found the book yesterday. I had planned to tell you about it, but I was mixed up by unexpected things.
As recently all of us are busy preparing the Postgraduate Entrance Examnation（拼写错误）, I believe that the book I borrowed from you is crucial to you. Accordingly, I wonder if it is convenient for（用介词to） you this week and I will return the book.
Please accept my aplogise（这里应该用名词apology）and forgive me. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
  Yours truly,
   Li Ming点评：7分注意拼写错误和格式，这种文体不需要标题。