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Dear Sir or Madam,
     As I am planning to go traveling to your province with due consideration that your province have the good reputation of delicious food and the beautiful scenic spots, I want to inquire you some problems about this traveling.
     Firstly, please introduce to me one or two spots which have both wonderful scenery and historical culture. Secondly, I wonder if you can help me to arrange a appropriate route for traveling and to book the accommodations.
     I would like to express my gratitude for your time and your enthusiastic help. I look forward to your reply.
      Yours sincerely,
     LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, As I am planning to go traveling to your province with due consideration that your province have the good reputation of delicious food and the beautiful scenic spots, I want to inquire you some problems about this traveling. Firstly, please introduce to me one or two spots which have both wonderful scenery and historical culture. Secondly, I wonder if you can help me to arrange a（应该用an） appropriate route for traveling and to book the accommodations. I would like to express my gratitude for your time and your enthusiastic help. I look forward to your reply.  Yours sincerely, LiMing点评：6-7分错误很少。但是第二段的内容写的不是很理想。你可以说为你推荐一两个好的景点，并为你制定一个合适的路线。这两个方面的联系更紧密。