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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I am writing to express my sincere apology to you for my carelessness causes you any inconvenience.
Firstly, I would like to extend my honestly gratitude to the kind assistance you offer me during my vocation in America. In addition, did you remember I have borrowed one book relating sustainable economic development from you in America? When I returned home in China, I found the book lied in my luggage surprisingly. I am so sorry about my careless for you.
Coinciding with my father’s business trip to America next week, I would let him deliver the book to you. I hope the settlement of the matter will satisfied with you. Once again, please accept my genuinely apology for your inconvenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am writing to express my sincere apology to you for my carelessness causes you any inconvenience.（这句话逻辑混乱，后面有两个谓语动词，在causes前加that）
Firstly, I would like to extend my honestly（修饰名词用形容词） gratitude to the kind assistance you offer（应该用过去时） me during my vocation in America. In addition, did you remember I have borrowed one book relating sustainable economic development from you in America? When I returned home in China, I found the book lied in my luggage surprisingly. I am so sorry about my careless for you.
Coinciding with my father’s business trip to America next week, I would let him deliver the book to you. I hope the settlement of the matter will（加be） satisfied with you. Once again, please accept my genuinely apology for your inconvenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming点评：6分注意控制字数。在这种简单的文体中，避免出现语法错误。