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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or madam,
     I am a sophomore of our college，economic academy. And I’m writing this letter to inquire aboutselecting minor courses on line. I will appreciate it if you could help to solve my problem.
     First of all, I want to consult the final date of this activity, because our monitor has failed to tell the accurate time . In addition , for my carelessness , I have lost my password of my student account last week. I’m so sorry to ask whether our relevant teachers could help me to get it back, or I must register another personal account .
    Sorry for your time-consuming and the convenience I cause. Look forward to your reply .
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming

     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir or madam（Sir or Madam）, I am a sophomore of our college，economic academy（这是你们学校的名称吗）. And I’m writing this letter to inquire aboutselecting minor courses on line. I will appreciate it if you could help to solve my problem. First of all, I want to consult the final date of this activity, because our monitor has failed to tell the accurate time . In addition , for my carelessness , I have lost my password of my student account last week. I’m so sorry to ask whether our relevant teachers could help me to get it back, or I must register another personal account .Sorry for your time-consuming and the convenience I cause（注意前面是sorry for）. Look（应该是looking） forward to your reply .Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：6分表达要简洁。注意句子的逻辑。