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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a graduate student.I want to buy some booksabout the Entrance test of English.With consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books,I want to buy some books which I need.
     Firstly, Could you deliver these books to me which Iwant to buyby EMS .Secondly, I need to know which terms could be used pay for these books and the after-sell service.In addtion to ,could you give me some the relationship of the information about these book which I wish to buy ,such as authers, names , publishing houses ,and so on .
    I would much grateful if you could consideration of my requesters.I look forward to hearing from you soon .
     Yours sincerely
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a graduate student.I want to buy some booksabout the Entrance test of English. With consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books, I want to buy some books which I need.（不要累述） Firstly, Could you deliver these books to me which I want to buyby EMS .Secondly, I need to know which terms could be used pay for these books and the after-sell service. In addtion（拼写错误）to（去掉） ,could you give me some the relationship of the information about these book（应该用复数） which I wish to buy ,such as authers（拼写错误）, names , publishing houses ,and so on .I would much grateful if you could consideration of my requesters（requester是“请求器”、“请求程序”的意思）. I look forward to hearing from you soon . Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：大概的是把模板中的几条内容调整了一下顺序写，要有你自己的内容。