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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or madam,
     I am a candidate of your recently advertised post for a surgeon in your hospital.I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with informations as regards the interview.
     The primary questions of my inquiry are as follows.For one thing,please give me more details about accurate position where the interview will be held because I am a new here.For another,I also would love to know what else I should take with me except my resume.
     Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated and I look forward to here from you soon.
    Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear sir or madam（Sir or Madam）, I am a candidate of your recently advertised post for a surgeon in your hospital. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with informations（information是不可数名词） as regards the interview. The primary questions of my inquiry are as follows. For one thing, please give me more details about accurate position where the interview will be held because I am a（去掉）new here. For another, I also would love to know what else I should take with me except my resume. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated and I look forward to here（hearing） from you soon.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 点评：8分写的不错，注意格式和细节。如果是把第二段第一句去掉，在这一段加上另一条的询问效果会更好。