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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I'm a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university.My plan is tostart my course next term and I would begrateful if you would be so kind to provide me with certain essential information.
     First,what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university?I have got a bachelor's degree from BeiJing University,I wonder if there are any further academic requirements.Second,how much are the tuition fees?Although I intend to be self-supporting,I would be intersted to hear if there are any scholorships available for international students.Third,what is the sitution about accomodation?
     Thank you for your consideration of my application.I look forward to your reply and to attending your esteemed institution.
     Sincerely yours,
     LiMing.
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is tostart my course next term and I would begrateful if you would be so kind to provide me with certain essential information. First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I have got a bachelor's degree from BeiJing（Beijing或是Peking） University, I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be intersted（拼写错误） to hear if there are any scholorships（拼写错误） available for international students. Third, what is the sitution（拼写错误） about accomodation（拼写错误）? Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to your reply and to attending your esteemed institution. Sincerely yours, LiMing.（不用句号去掉）点评：字数超了，会被扣分的。模板用的太多了，主要用自己的语言，模板只是参考和辅助。