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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    As a student who want to take the College English Text 6, I am planning to place an order of some bibliography books about it. And may I have some helps from your bookstore?
    Firstly, would you please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books? Secondly, it is so kind of you that if you could help me to describe the advantage and defect of those books. Thirdly, I also need to know the term of the payment and after-sell service.
    Thanks for your consideration and times. And I look forward to hearing from you soon.
     Yours Sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,As a student who want（先行词是a student，这里要用wants） to take the College English Text 6, I am planning to place an order of some bibliography books about it. And may I have some helps from your bookstore?Firstly, would you please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books? Secondly, it is so kind of you that if you could help me to describe the advantage and defect of those books. Thirdly, I also need to know the term of the payment and after-sell service.Thanks for your consideration and times. And I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming点评：整体上是以篇很好的小作文，但是模板内容用的有点多。