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    考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,I’m a college student from Yangzhou University.As a library renowned for its books in a large number and variety,I heard your library is currently one of the biggest in China.So ,I would like to search for some materials about my curriculum with the help of your library.Also,I have several questions to consult.First,how long is your library open to the readers everyday?Second,how many books could I borrow for a time?Last,would you mind if I read a book inside the library?I would like to express my great gratitude if you could give the above question attention.Thank you for your time and look forward to your reply.                                        Yours sincerely,                                         Li Ming
     
        考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m a college student from Yangzhou University. As a library renowned for its books in a large number and variety, I heard your library is currently one of the biggest in China. So , I would like to search for some materials about my curriculum with the help of your library. Also, I have several questions to consult.First, how long is（这里应该用疑问词does） your library open to the readers everyday? Second, how many books could I borrow for a time? Last , would you mind if I read a book inside the library?I would like to express my great gratitude if you could give the above question attention. Thank you for your time and look（应该用looking）forward to your reply.                                        Yours sincerely,                                         Li Ming 点评：6-7分二三段写的还不错，第一段内容有点冗长，需要简化。