考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(250)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to you to ask for some details about the Speaking Competition. It will be a great honor and a challenge for us to take part in it.
Initially, could you tell me the subject of this speaking? After knowing the topic, I will begin to prepare my speech. Secondly, what makes me puzzle and confuse is the process of competition. I heard that there will be an aksing part form audience during the competition. I will make a rehears if it is true. Finally, I will be appreciate if you can tell me the exact time of the competition. I was failed to find it in the poster.
Your immediate reply to my letter will be highly appreciated.
     Yours,
Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to you to ask for some details about the Speaking Competition. It will be a great honor and a challenge for us to take part in it.
Initially, could you tell me the subject of this speaking? After knowing the topic, I will begin to prepare my speech. Secondly, what makes me puzzle and confuse is the process of competition. I heard that there will be an aksing（asking） part form audience during the competition. I will make a rehears if it is true. Finally, I will be appreciate（注意前面是be，这里不能用动词原形） if you can tell me the exact time of the competition. I was failed to find it in the poster.
Your immediate reply to my letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours（建议加sincerely/truly等副词）,
Li Ming点评：8分写的很不错的一篇作文，注意考试的时候要注意控制字数。