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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
   
    I am writing this letter to ask some information about lessons of the post graduate entrance exams of your agency. As I will take the exam in January next year, I hope that I can get some help from you earnestly.
   
    First of all, what kinds of courses which fits me best does your agency offer? Secondly, what are the dates these classes started? Anddo I need to prepare the materials whichis neededall by myself?Finally, how about the costs? Can I pay online?
   
    I am looking foraword to your reply eagerly.
   
    yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this letter to ask some information about lessons of the post graduate entrance exams of your agency. As I will take the exam in January next year, I hope that I can get some help from you earnestly.First of all, what kinds of courses which fits（注意单复数保持一致） me best does your agency offer? Secondly, what are the dates these classes started? Anddo I need to prepare the materials whichis（注意单复数保持一致） neededall by myself?Finally, how about the costs? Can I pay（加代词it） online?I am looking foraword（拼写错误） to your reply eagerly.yours（Yours） sincerely,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：7-8分写的很不错的一个小作文。要注意主语和谓语的单复数保持一致，另外不要在格式上丢分。