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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a graduating student who majored in Accounting. I would like to apply for a position to a nationalized bank. I am writing this letter to see if it is possible for you to provide me some information regarding the qualifications for the bank. I also inquire the information about what kind of examination form should be adopted by bank? And which day should I apply for the position on the internet during the application period? At last, could you commend to some reference books for me? I am really grateful for your consideration of my request, and I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible. Yours sincerely LiMing
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a graduating（用graduate） student who majored in Accounting. I would like to apply for a position to a nationalized bank. I am writing this letter to see if it is possible for you to provide me some information regarding the qualifications for the bank. I also inquire（你下面问到的内容应该是你上句话提到的） the information about what kind of examination form should be adopted by bank? And which day should I apply for the position on the internet（Internet） during the application period? At last, could you commend to some reference books for me? I am really grateful for your consideration of my request, and I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible. Yours sincerely（加逗号） LiMing点评：6分结构不是很好，第一段应该说明来意，第二段进行提问，第三段致谢表面盼望的心情