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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Teacher Nao,
    I am a senior student who is preparing for the entrance exam of graduate students.Now I have some questions about the English composition to ask you.And I would be much grateful if you could help me to solve these problems.
    Firstly,the first paragraph of the composition is always confuse me,could you tell me how to write it as soon as possible.Secondly,it is generally agree upon that we have to recite some classical model essays in order to make a good marks.If you could provide me some classical essays about the past decade.I will be greatly honored.
    Thank you for your time and consideration.And looking forward to your reply.
    Sincerely yours,
     LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Teacher Nao,I am a senior student who is preparing for the entrance exam of graduate students. Now I have some questions about the English composition to ask you. And I would be much grateful if you could help me to solve these problems.Firstly, the first paragraph of the composition is（去掉，后面的confuse做谓语动词） always confuse（用第三人称单数形式） me, could you tell me how to write it as soon as possible. Secondly, it is generally agree upon that we have to recite some classical model essays in order to make a good marks. If you could provide me some classical essays about the past decade.（注意这不是一句话，要把结尾的句号改成逗号） I will be greatly honored.Thank you for your time and consideration. And looking forward to your reply.  Sincerely yours, LiMing点评：8分写的非常不错，错误比较少，继续加油，争取拿满分。