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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a chairman of student union in a college. Next month, we are planning to visit a historical exhibition in your town as our social survey project,and I am writing to see if it possible for you to provide me with imformation concering the exhibition.
     First,what is the size of the exhibition and which dynasty it concerns.Second , when will the exhibition open and close .Third ,all of us are students,so are there any discounts.
     I would be obliged to you if you could let me konw the above imformation. I look forward to your reply.
     Yours sincerely
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a（应该用定冠词the） chairman of student union in a college. Next month, we are planning to visit a historical exhibition in your town as our social survey project, and I am writing to see if it possible for you to provide me with imformation concering（拼写错误） the exhibition. First, what is the size of the exhibition and which dynasty it concerns.（这是个问句，结尾应该用问号） Second, when will the exhibition open and close . （这是个问句，结尾应该用问号） Third ,all of us are students, so are there any discounts. （这是个问句，结尾应该用问号） I would be obliged to you if you could let me konw（拼写错误） the above imformation（拼写错误）. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：6分拼写错误和标点符号错误比较多，这些都是很明显的错误，是完全可以避免的。