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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a freshman from departmen of Chinese language and literature in our school. I am writing this letter to inquire about the details of borrowingbooks and studying in thelibrary.
     In my spare time , I like reading and writing. And from my teacher ,I know thatthere are various of good and significant books in our library.But I have no idea about how to take good advantage of using it .Could you tell me the opening and closing time and how to get my own card. I also want to konw thelimitation of borrowingbooks.
    Words fail me whenIwish toexpress my sincere thanks.AndIlook forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
     Yours sincerely,
     LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a freshman from departmen（拼写错误） of Chinese language and literature in our school. I am writing this letter to inquire about the details of borrowingbooks and studying in thelibrary.【 In my spare time , I like reading and writing. And from my teacher ,I know thatthere are various of good and significant books in our library.】（这一部分与问询关系不是很大，可以一句话带过） But I have no idea about how to take good advantage of using it .Could you tell me the opening and closing time and how to get my own card. I also want to konw（拼写错误） thelimitation of borrowingbooks.Words fail me whenIwish toexpress my sincere thanks. AndIlook forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, LiMing点评：5-6分第二段写的不是很好，问询信重点在问询。