考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(253)

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Dear Sir or Madam， I am present a training class for improve English language ability. I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. First of all, what about the course content arrangement, for examplethe oral, the writting, the hearing and so on. Secondly, if it is has class on weekend, and how many hours a day? Thirdly, I want to know the terms of payment.I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam， I am present（加介词in） a training class for improve（介词后用动名词） English language ability. I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. First of all, what about the course content arrangement, for examplethe oral, the writing（拼写错误）, the hearing and so on. Secondly, if it is（去掉，后面的has做谓语动词） has class on weekend, and how many hours a day? Thirdly, I want to know the terms of payment.I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li ming（Ming）点评：5分字数严重不够。避免简单错误的出现。