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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or Madam,
    I am astudent form department of English,and I am writing to you to inquire some questions about the foreign university which you recommended me last week.
    Firstly,I would like toknow if there are any other especially require but for bachelor's degree of English.Moreover I want to know how muchI will pay formy tuition on an annual basis.Finally,Is it possible for me to attain the scholarship for international students? I would be much grateful if you could send me more information about the university.
    Thank you for your time and consideration,I am looking foraward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
    Sincerely yours,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear sir（Sir） or Madam, I am a student form department of English, and I am writing to you to inquire some questions about the foreign university which you recommended me last week.Firstly, I would like toknow if there are any other especially（这里应该用形容词，后面应该是名词）require（这里应该用名词） but for bachelor's degree of English.Moreover I want to know how muchI will pay formy tuition on an annual basis. Finally, Is（is） it possible for me to attain the scholarship for international students? I would be much grateful if you could send me more information about the university. Thank you for your time and consideration,（加连词and） I am looking foraward（拼写错误） to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours, Li Ming点评：6-7分整体写的还是不错的，但是错误有点多了。要注意单词的拼写和细节问题。