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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir Or Madam,
    As the drving is a popular and necessary technique now, I want to study this skill in your train organization. So if you can tell me the message what be needed for the entrol, I will be not feel more grateful.
     I am so appreciate that you could spend sometime on these questions.First,what things are neededwhen I go to sign up,picture,identity card or somrthing else? Second, what time can we begin the training and how much for this training?
     It is so nice that if you can reply me soon, and wish your answer.
     Yours Sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir Or（or） Madam,As the drving（拼写错误） is a popular and necessary technique now, I want to study this skill in your train organization. So if you can tell me the message what be needed for the entrol（拼写错误）, I will be not feel more grateful.【I am so appreciate that you could spend sometime（做spend的宾语，用some time） on these questions.】（上一段已经客套过客，这里不需要了） First, what things are neededwhen I go to sign up, picture, identity card or somrthing（拼写错误） else? Second, what time can we begin the training and how much for this training? It is so nice that if you can reply me soon, and wish your answer（这里什么意思？）. Yours Sincerely, Li（不用空格）Ming点评：5-6分错误有点多，明确你重点应该写什么。