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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Mr. President,
    I am a student in this university who want to take part in the Chinese-speaking Contest. But the information what I known is blurry. So, would you please give me some help?
    Firstly, where and when is the contest hold? What is required of candidates? Secondly, how do I sign up the contest and what about the deadline? Thirdly, what about the subject of the content andhow much time is gave per candidate? Finally, what is the award of the contest?
    Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
      Yours Sincerely,
      Li Ming
   
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Mr. President,
I am a student in this university who want（先行词是a student，所以这里应该用wants） to take part in the Chinese-speaking Contest. But the information what I known is blurry. So, would you please give me some help? Firstly, where and when is the contest hold（这里应该用hold的过去分词held，因为是被动语态）? What is required of candidates? Secondly, how do I sign up the contest and what about the deadline? Thirdly, what about the subject of the content andhow much time is gave（用过去分词given） per candidate? Finally, what is the award of the contest?Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.  Yours Sincerely,  Li Ming点评：6分细节错误有点多。第二段的问询句式比较单一。