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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam:
     I am a college student and will graduate this term.In order to write my graduation thesis,I plan to visit your library next month for some reference books.
    I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out some books in the area of polymer material.I want to konw some informations about material developed recently and the new theories put forward by researchers and scholars in this field.
    Could you also provide the following information:the opening and closing time of the library,the count of books can be borrowed at one time,and how long I can keep the book.
    Thank you in advance for your help.
    Yours,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam:（英语中用逗号） I am a college student and will graduate this term. In order to write my graduation thesis, I plan to visit your library next month for some reference books. I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out some books in the area of polymer material. I want to konw（拼写错误） some informations（information是不可数名词） about material developed（这里需要用一个名词） recently and the new theories put forward by researchers and scholars in this field. Could you also provide the following information（注意这是一个疑问语气的句子，建议再调整一下这个句子）: the opening and closing time of the library, the count of books can be borrowed at one time, and how long I can keep the book. Thank you in advance for your help.Yours（建议加一个副词，例如sincerely或是truly等）, Li Ming点评：6分字数有点超，另外字数有点多。另外要注意格式。