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Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writing to ask information about traveling to Hong Kong during the May holiday.
I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a DIY program which may involve most of the famous scenic spots. My plan is to spend seven days from May 1st to 7th there with the first day for Disneyland and the last one for shopping. I would appreciate it if you could provide me with your relevant leaflet and a detailed price list, covering both hotel and a return ticket.
I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to ask information about traveling to Hong Kong during the May holiday.
I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a DIY program which may involve most of the famous scenic spots. My plan is to spend seven days from May 1st to 7th there with the first day for Disneyland and the last one for shopping. I would appreciate it if you could provide me with your relevant leaflet and a detailed price list, covering both hotel（应该用复数） and a return ticket.
I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7-8分写的很好，唯一不足的地方是不知道你问的是谁。模板用的比较多。