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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or madam,
    I am ungraduate from the Department of Food Science and Engineering of South China Agricultural University.I am writting this letter for purpose of inquiring some informations about how to prepare for the entrance exam.
    In order to pass the entrance exam successfully,there are some questions of mine as follows.Firstly and foremost,how to make a plan to take advantage of time and improve the efficiency of my study.In addition,it is imperative for me whether I should attend some courses of the entrance exam.Lastly,which is the best way to adjust my emotions to persist going on.
     Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
    Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear sir or madam, I am（加不定冠词an）ungraduate（拼写错误） from the Department of Food Science and Engineering of South China Agricultural University. I am writting（拼写错误）this letter for purpose of inquiring some informations（拼写错误）about how to prepare for the entrance exam. In order to pass the entrance exam successfully, there are some questions of mine as follows.（这一句话与上一段最后一句话重复，可以去掉） Firstly and foremost（First and foremost）, how to make a plan to take advantage of time and（加动词不定式to） improve the efficiency of my study. In addition, it is imperative for me whether I should attend some courses of the entrance exam. Lastly, which is the best way to adjust my emotions to persist going on.（这是个问句，用问号） Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely,  Li Ming点评：6-7分整体写的还可以，要注意细节和拼写。